Chapter 1 in My Newest Story

For those of you who are unaware, I have been working on a parallel story to Kingdom Hearts. By "Parallel" I mean that it happened at the same time and so the characters in the story will experience some of the same events and meet some of the same people as the normal Kingdom Hearts characters did. I have recently posted the first chapter under my other blogspot page at www.DizII.blogspot.com . I am trying to mold the story in a fashion that those who know nothing about Kingdom Hearts will still be able to understand it. If you have some spare time, please check it out and leave some comments on the page. TY!